Monday, 20 March 2017

my special place

MY SPECIAL PLACE. By Sophie Munro
  1. Lake
  2. Waterfall
  3. Boat
  4. Food

Shiver Shiver the lake is cold. As me and my cousins went out we felt muddy seaweed around our legs and it felt like a fish was going around our legs. Then my cousin screamed because she doesn't  like fish especially Asha. After we went to the rocks and we all jumped of the rocks but not asha because she thinks there are sharks. She thinks there are sharks in the lake but there isn't she hates sharks.


Finally were there. My cousins and me jumped off the rocks next to the waterfall. It was fun. We did it over and over again.The waterfall was shiny and glittery.It felt lovely  and cold but it was fine.   


At my special place we can go on uncle Bill’s boat  ‘’Yay, we are going to the boat. Are we going for a ride in the boat now uncle bill?’’. Uncle bill  said “Yes.” My cousins and my sister and I are all coming. It is fun when you go on the boat because you can go fishing. When dad caught a fish all of us said’’What kind of fish is it?’’He said’’ It was a snapper’ aunt erin thot that the fish was a normal fish


At my special place we ate heaps of food like. Marshmallows hot dogs met pezza chips dip biscuits lollys.the food was delicious  and then we had to go and have a  ice-cream and it was so yummy that they bought  as another one but a different kind but it was still nice.  





2 comments:

  1. great work maybe put more describing words in your writing

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  2. Great work Sophie I like how you added lots of detail, but next time you could add a few more full stops and work on your spelling.

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