My Best Memory
My best memory is when I last went to Gisborne to see my family. My cousins are called Asha, Inedy, Emmaly, Roro, Bodin, Kala and Joja . My aunties and uncles names are erin, ados, sera, wee, jojo, and shaney boy. When I was there I went on the sea biscuit with my cousin Emily she was yelling slower and i was yelling faster. She was sitting on my leg and it was sore when we got off. We went around 10 times and it was fun. Then when we got back where we were staying. Then we were all of as were dressed. We all had a slashy it was delicious. Then we had lunch for lunch we had hotdogs. After that we had chips, cracks, dip, biscuits and lollies. It was fun that's why I didn't want to go home from there
What makes me laugh
What makes me laugh is when my cousins do a funny Dance thats makes me and my eldest cousins laugh. It was funny and they were meant to be a ballerina. After they finished their dance we had dinner.
A Fun Fact About Me
A fun fact about me is playing in the pool with my sister and her friends. In the pool we play tag. Then we hop out and have an ice block. Then we jumped back in the pool.
My most loved hobby
My most love hobby is having lots of teddys, I have 100 teddies and I love them. I have 2 big teddies and I love them the most. I have 3 little ones that I sleep with 2 of them are kiwis and one of them is a pony.
star: i like how you added heaps of detail in your writing wish: when some one is talking you need to add talking marks
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